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i really like this piece and i think the use of colour here is wonderful and your overall style is very nice your brush strokes give it a lovely painted feel that is complimentary to i think the atmosphere of the peice. however i think the part of this that let you down is the anatomy i.e. the hand the feet and the way the bust sits but all of that is reasonablly easy to fix with some references and a touch of practice (i have this problem too :) ) i love the texture on the dress and how sensual her face is but i find the flower to the side in the background a bit confusing and distracting but i think that is more personal taste as i said i think the piece is lovely and you are very talented just mainly watch the anatomy
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Thank you so much for writing this, it was so kind of you to do! :glomp: I agree, my anatomical skills need so much work! D: I'm practising a little everyday from a guide book now . If I struggle with proportions in the future I might use the guides in there to help~ :) I hope I can improve on this aspect soon, it's really starting to bug me! xD :hug: Again, thank you so much for taking the time to write this for me~ :iconiluplz:

Oh, and that flower doesn't make sense to me either! ^^; Originally I thought it might be some kind of ornament to hold the curtain back, but it's too distracting X__x I should have drawn over it, you're right! :heart:

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i actually really like the curtain texture i think it frames her nicely and leads the eye down her body so please dont get rid of that :)
but im glad it was helpful i always feel bad about commenting about anatomy as im so bad at it though im getting better a tiny bit at a time lol i agree that it can be very frustrating :)
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